Final Proyect

My Version
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The huge flames of the fire that Jack started burned Ralph and Jack and everyone in his tribe except for Samnerick. They both got severely hurt. Ralph was able to run away from the fire, while Jack and some members of his tribe continued trying to find a way out
Later, he got completely surrounded by fire and he got no way out, and he died.
Ralph decided to go to the beach for being able to wash his wounds. He started walking down the mountains to the beach and he found Jack’s tribe and he begged” please, please don’t kill me!” Sam laughed and said, “We don’t know were Jack and the rest of the tribe are, but now that we killed the beast we don’t really mind. We only were on his tribe because he made us feel safe from the fact that the beast could kill one of us.
As soon as they commented Ralph this Ralph asked them” would you join my tribe and they agreed.
They continued their way to the beach. “I am starving of hunger I got to get food soon”
Erick added “Am Angry too. Lets get something to eat”
Sam said, “Lets hunt”
Jack replied, “Am hurt I prefer continuing our way to the beach and watching out for some fruit”
After they had walked for a while, and they were not that far to the beach, Ralph saw a palm and said “Hey we can eat coconuts”
They all agreed.
Sam tried to get them but he couldn’t reach them, so he called Ralph who was taller. Ralph tried and he wasn’t able to get them, so they decided to work as a team to reach them.
Sam and Erick kneeled down and Ralph will step on their knees. Their attempt was successful.
They sat down a tree to rest and eat the coconuts. Ralph finished with his and he wanted some more. So he waited Sam and Erick to finish eating theirs and then he asked for help. They got up and helped him.
When Ralph finished eating his second coconut it was already sunset. They were not going o be able to get to the beach before it turned dark unless they hurried.
They quickly got back into their way back to the beach.
Sam said “We are not making it to the beach today, why don’t we stay here over night”
Ralph replied, ”In my opinion we will make it, and my wounds really hurt. I want to get there today”
It was already dark when they finally got to the beach. When they got there Ralph went to wash his wounds while Sam and Erick Looked for a shelter to sleep over night.
While looking for shelter SamnErick Found a huge Boat. They were really exited and they got lots of hope. They went running to tell Jack the great news
As soon Ralph heard the great news, he went running to see the boat and in his way to the boat, in the darkness of the night he crashes someone and he fels on top of him. He said “Sorry, sorry are you okay?” The guy replied ”Yes, I am the navy officer uncharged to look for you guys. Finally I found you, I thought you weren’t alive!”. Sam replied, “well there is only some of us alive, not all of us”. The officer replied, “Were is the rest of you”. Ralph said, “We are the only ones alive”. They went back into the huge ship and when back home.





Rational
The part of the story I started on in my version was when Jack started the fire to kill Ralph. I chose this part was a great part to make some of the characters die. The characters I wanted to make die on my version are the mean ones.
This story has a meaning in terms of religion and in my religion I have always thought that god at a certain point makes mean people pay for their actions.
I thought that out of all the characters that were still alive at Golding’s ending the only ones who were not mean were Ralph, Sam, and Erick.
Before the story ended, I wanted all the rest of the characters to die and that way they could pay for their actions. That’s why I decided that only Ralph , Sam, and Erick were saved.